My poem.....

Well I am not the author or poet kinds....but I'd like to share a poem that I have written....I admit that I don't really share my poems,but this one was written a long time back (plus it got published in a mag so I think its not that bad!!!)....

Betrayal

Her existence was something exceptional for me

Her understanding nature was a pleasure to me

She seemed to be social to all,yet special to me

In this unfaithful world,she was a saviour to me.

She was my only soul-mate

She was the only friend written in my fate

How can I forget her assuring hand

For because of her,in this world,I stand.

She was at times my guide

Among others,it was her thoughts I used to abide

Most times she consoled me

Every time she supported me.

But one day I heard her say

That I have been chosen as her prey

I was totally take n aback

She said,she'd packed my sack!

I couldn't utter a word

My thoughts were that of a caged bird

Her intentions pierced through me like a sword

I couldn't believe whatever I had heard

Everything around seemed wayward.

My heart was totally broken

I understood,from my sleep,I was awoken

I was partially angry,partially sad

As I thought I had lost all I had.

Then I told my mind

I won't trust any of her kind

I understood,it was my mistake

I learnt that some friendships are fake!!

Why I am here.......?!

This is the first time I am venturing into the world of "blogging"....Its interesting to read other blogs and comments...you get to make fun of other posts,comment on what is right and wrong,point out faults....that (fyi) is the easier way out....What I don't understand is that if you have the audacity to sit and find faults then why not prove your point by writing a blog yourself??? Here is why you can write a blog yourself...it's FREE!!!!....its FUN!!!...and of course it gives you an opportunity to SAY WHAT YOU WANT!!!....Enough reasons to write your own blog,right???
The whole concept of sharing your thoughts with loads of people is somewhat scary....I understand...being one of the lot who is hesitant to share things with too many people,I totally understand the thought process behind making up your mind to step up and speak your heart out....but you know what? screw it....just do it !!(hope Nike doesn't mind me using their tag line! :P)...The whole point is not what you say and who you are addressing in your blog...its just about saying what you need to say...!!! Makes sense??(I really hope I do!!:P)....
Ok, so my sense of humour is a little on the weaker side(that is certainly an understatement,some will definitely agree!!)....and I may be a little repetitive (there I go again !)....so what?? so long as I say what I want....it hardly matters....if you want to read on....you are welcome...and if you feel that you can do a better job then please feel free to post your blog site I'll learn from you!!...and if you are of the category who will comment and not write yourself then please as of now (being a beginner myself) I'll just encourage you to write along!!....Oh and yeah if you fall in neither of the above categories then I'd like to clarify that constructive criticism only will be appreciated...!!