Well I am not the author or poet kinds....but I'd like to share a poem that I have written....I admit that I don't really share my poems,but this one was written a long time back (plus it got published in a mag so I think its not that bad!!!)....
Betrayal
Her existence was something exceptional for me
Her understanding nature was a pleasure to me
She seemed to be social to all,yet special to me
In this unfaithful world,she was a saviour to me.
She was my only soul-mate
She was the only friend written in my fate
How can I forget her assuring hand
For because of her,in this world,I stand.
She was at times my guide
Among others,it was her thoughts I used to abide
Most times she consoled me
Every time she supported me.
But one day I heard her say
That I have been chosen as her prey
I was totally take n aback
She said,she'd packed my sack!
I couldn't utter a word
My thoughts were that of a caged bird
Her intentions pierced through me like a sword
I couldn't believe whatever I had heard
Everything around seemed wayward.
My heart was totally broken
I understood,from my sleep,I was awoken
I was partially angry,partially sad
As I thought I had lost all I had.
Then I told my mind
I won't trust any of her kind
I understood,it was my mistake
I learnt that some friendships are fake!!
4 comments:
thats like a brilliant poem.. hidden talents...
Obviously I read it the second time. . . its really good especially since you were in high school wen you wrote this , right? Wonder if it was all just fiction . . . neways you've got a whole diary full of gr8 poems .. Bring it on!!
-Deep
awesome poem...
Tht was a very intense poem...Why is it that the best of the poems and thoughts come up only when we are either feeling low or angry? I really want u to post a more happier poem,the next time u plan to post one..:)
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